[Lioncourt]

As some of you old codgers might remember, I was working on a recruitment poster before my break, and this is how far I had gotten:



Is this something you lot would like me to pick back up and if so, any suggestions for how to make it even better / more suitable etc?

Regards,

Gov

Edit note: like changing "Fist" to first

[Sharpkiller]

You have two "i"'s in join. You may also want to replace the logo with the official {UFP} logo.

[Lioncourt]

You have two "i"'s in join. You may also want to replace the logo with the official {UFP} logo.

Meh, talk about a balls up lol.. while it was only a mock up, I hadn't relised it was a c**k up as well I'll have a fiddle later, particularly as there is far more material to work with than when I started.

[Alogain]

I just wanted to comment that I think it looks fantastic. Don't take this the wrong way, since you were asking for input.... But since United Federation of Planets is actually part of the Star Trek universe (Movies, shows, novels etc.) why change the "boldly go" statement?

Again I think your work is excellent, but I question the wording at the top. I would suggest sticking to the patented verse or coming up with something entirely different.

Just my 2 credits

[William Aldebourne]

I think it looks amazing, far better than I could have done thats for sure. I'd run it through a few people to check for extra/missing letters, but other than that I'd love to post it on the gaming sites I go to and try to stir up some friends excitement.

[Alexei The Visant]

Looks awesome,I can say that.But,I will have to agree with Sharp,{UFP} logo would have looked much better lol

[Lioncourt]

It was a mock-up and when it was last being worked on the final design hadn't been decided. This coming week I'm going to spend time working on it, as it'll be easier with my daughter back in school, and I'm going to add in things like the official log and make other visual adjustments and what not. So... watch this space, cause change is coming

[Trav]

Yes, very nice indeed. As already said, replace the Starfleet logo with the oficial {UFP} logo, and I'd actually suggest adding some graphical edges/borders as well to the whole poster, so that you could see where it ends.

By edges, I mean for example the grey borders our signatures have. It just looks better.

[William Aldebourne]

Maybe its just me, but would like a curled up corner/wear tear be cool on it in some version? Like have a clean version, and then have an aged version? Its completely beyond my abilities, but I was just curious if you were able to do stuff like that.

[Lioncourt]

Here's the latest version, still playing around with the border, so consider that a placeholder for now.

[Lioncourt]

Here's the alternate border:

[LynxMukka]

Looking a lot better, nice.

[Babyhead4127]

it great idea i like it

[Lioncourt]

Many thanks, here's a modest update:

[Breeze]

Looking good!

Ps. You wouldn't happen to know that Science Officer's name & number would you? :mrgreen: