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Atlantis Class MkII Work in progress

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    #1
     –  Last edited by Elessar; Fri 25 Mar, 2011 9:17 PM.
    The {UFP} Flagship USS Atlantis NX-101000 have been in service for around 15 years and done a lot of missions for the SFC mostly deep space exploring in the Beta and Gamma quadrants. During this time have the senior staff sent information on the new systems that the ship had for experimentation. During the last dock was the USS Atlantis fitted with a Prototype slipstream core to see if she could fly with. Sadly did this experiment almost end in a disaster. The ship hull was not designed to fly in that speed and was almost torn apart thankfully did the engineering crew in the last second turn the slipstream drive off before the ship lost their main nacelles. The main nacelles were so badly damaged it could not engage warp power. There for was the ship forced to turn on the tow system and engage the saucers nacelles. In space dock did the main designer Commodore Elessar go aboard the USS Atlantis to see the damage to the ship and interview the senior staff and crew on things they think could need a change.

    When Commodore Elessar came back to the Advance Ship Design Bureau to brief the Command about the damages to the ship and suggestions to improve the ships durability and the recommendation to remove the slipstream core from the ship.
    After the command had approved the list of changes to the USS Atlantis did Commodore Elessar bring up the suggestion to build the next generation of the Atlantis class that will contain newer systems that are developed from the original Atlantis class and the ability to travel in slipstream speed. After some discussion with the Starfleet Command did Commodore Elessar get permission to start designing the new generation of the Atlantis class. The project name became Atlantis class MkII

    the Early Design Drawings have been Cl 1 Clearence

    Ship measurements
    Length: 885m
    Beam: 290m
    Height: 90m

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    Atlantis Class MkII top by UFPElessar

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    Atlantis Class MkII left by UFPElessar
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    Hello all as some have seen have I not updated this post since I created it and that is becouse I was working on the 3D model in the shadows. but now since I have shown it on septembers UFPAC I though I whould give this an update with some nice 3D pictures feel free to coment on the ship.

    Atlantis Class MkII saucer 1 by UFPElessar

    atlantis class mkii 7 by ufpelessar d2zogiv

    atlantis class mkii per 1 by ufpelessar d2zjw6l

    atlantis class mkii 6 by ufpelessar d2zogfk

    atlantis class mkii 5 by ufpelessar d2zogd5

    atlantis class mkii 4 by ufpelessar d2zogae

    atlantis class mkii 3 by ufpelessar d2zog81
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     –  Last edited by Elessar; Wed 13 Oct, 2010 9:21 AM.
    Hello all

    after alot of thinking and so on did I come to the conclusion that the Atlantis Class MkII design I did set as a working name for the new ship could not have the same name as the original Atlantis class. I did set the name due to the liknes in the designs but when I started looking on the two designs when I was making the last animation for the UFPAC I did notis alot of differant things in the design. also when I was looking on the inside ship systems and other stuff I did realize that I can't have the same name for the new ship class even if I add the MkII since it is a whole new design. just to take some major differences in the main design I think some of you have notised if you have followed my work.

    1. the main impulse engiens are totaly differant. on the original design did I have them on the main nacell pylons like on the intrepid class. the new ship I have placed it in a "cavern" on the engineering section.

    2. the main shuttelbay on the Atlantis class is placed in the rear like on most starships. on the new ship it is placed on the middle of the ship with the openings on each side of the engineering sections.

    3. the original ship was only able to fly in warp speed. the new ship will be able to travel in slipstream speed

    4. the bigest change as some of you can guess. the size

    Atlantis class
    Lenght: 461m
    Beam: 186m
    Hight: 80m Hight: 91,4m

    New ship
    Lenght: 960,8m
    Beam: 286,2m
    Hight: 91,4m

    flagship by ufpelessar d2zjvub

    atlantis class mkii 5 by ufpelessar d2zogd5

    so due to this I did I decide to change the ship class name to a new one. and after a lot of thinking and a lot of rejects I did come up with some parameters I wanted to have on the name. I wanted hat the name would be consider peacefull and if needed dagerus, also it needed to have power in it and some other things but that was the major criterias I set.

    so I did think for around three four days on the name and I must say it is hard to find a neame that fits. still I did come up with some names that lead to the new name I have decided to have on the ship

    Whitestar
    Blackstar

    these where rejected due to that they have been used in a other tv series and I guess some of you know which one. but for those that don't did they use these names in the tv series Babylon 5.

    then I did come up with Eclips but that sounded to dark to have on a ship still I did remember some from the astronomy that is named solar eclips and right after that I did remember the name solar corona and decided to take that name for the new ship class

    since the solar corona is very beutyful to look at and it is very dangerus in the same time

    so there for is the new ship design remaned to Corona class from now
    and I know there is a name of a bear sort
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    Glad that you finally found a good name. Smile
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    its been a long time I been here due to personal reasons but its fun to see that this old post is still here as well as the one of the Atlantis class.

    maybe I should go back and redo/finish this ship and post it
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    Hey Elessar, you definitely should. It'd be good to see what she looks like finished
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    might have to rework the design a little to improve it. I will put it on my to do list Big Grin
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    Awesome, I can't wait to see what you come up with Elessar Smile
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