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Should I publish my Star Trek fan novel on here?

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    #1
    I've been working on an ongoing series, it is called USS WISP. it is my personal fan written novel about the crew of the USS WISP and their journeys. If you guys would like to see a constantly updated story or something like that then feel free to comment. Just let me know and we'll see where it takes us.
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    If you would like to share, then this is the perfect forum for it Smile
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    I hope you all enjoy, I will have the first part out later today

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    “He’s getting away,” barked officer Brandly, “fasers to stun, now!”
    On command the police followed orders and fired their fasers on the target, a young homeless boy. Chips of bricks flew as the boy swerved into the alley way. He ducked into a hole in one side of the wall and clumsily covered it with a tarp.
    “I could only get a loaf of bread,” he said gasping for air, “sorry sis.”
    “Calm down, you’re gonna burst a lung!” replied the small girl in the corner while suppressing a laugh.
    He tossed her the bread and slumped down against the wall.
    “I need a job, I cant take care of you like this.” Moaned the young man.
    “What about Star Fleet,” replied the girl with a toothy grin and a glint in her eye, “I heard they take almost anyone!”
    “Sal, I’m a criminal.” He said through gritted teeth.
    “They don’t know that,” Sal shrugged, “we have enough credits to get to the Academy, we just need the clothes on our back.”


    “Sal keep up!” she thought.
    “Holy ♥♥♥♥, this place is massive,” he cried, facing the Star Fleet Academy, “How will I ever get used to this?”
    “Watch your mouth Rye!” Sal shouted over the bustling noise of feet and murmurs.
    “Come on lets go!” Rye shouted running into the entrance.
    Rye flung open the doors and saw just how massive this place really was. Technology everywhere you looked, aliens, humans, even robots! He was quickly stopped and pulled to the side.
    “ahhhh a young man such as yourself must be looking to sign up with Star Fleet, follow me.” The man pointed the way and started walking in that direction.
    Within a few seconds Rye was in what the man called a uniform, it was much nicer than anything he had ever worn. He then instructed Rye to fill out a form and handed him a tablet.
    “H-how do I use this?” Rye asked looking extremely confused.
    “Oh just umm tap the choices that best suit you and then write your name, date of birth, and race.” The man replied with a soft grin.
    Several minutes go by and Rye finally finishes the form.
    “Here.” Rye pushed the tablet across the desk.
    “follow the blue arrows and enjoy your time here.” The man said this everyday and so it was second nature.
    Doors slid open and a blue arrow appeared on the ground, Rye followed instructions and followed the line down a quiet corridor. He walked down, and another door slid open. This was the start of something fantastic.

    “Congratulations Rye, you have graduated from Star Fleet Academy with the second highest grade!” shouted the UFP staff head over the booming cheers of class mates and friends.
    Pause- I know this isn’t normal of fan fics/ fan novels but I’d like to explain why I skipped his school year. As you know, school is boring, and Star Fleet Academy is no exception. I tried to write it, but I couldn’t bare to put anyone through that. So, let’s get back to the story.
    “Ensign Rye, report to Captain Lin’s quarters immediately” said lieutenant Joyner.
    “Yes sir.” Rye replied wondering what was going on.
    He enjoyed his time on the USS WISP a lot, he hated his rank however. He was the butt of everyone’s jokes, and always got blamed. He wanted to be on the bridge helping Captain Lin and the rest of the crew, not cleaning up after everyone.
    “Requesting permission to bridge, Captains orders” Rye groaned.
    “Granted” muttered Joyner.
    As Rye stepped into the turbo lift, he wondered if he was in trouble. Probably, he thought. Stepping onto the bridge he stopped as he realised everyone was looking at him, he blinked and hurried to Captain Lin’s quarters.
    “Please, sit.” The Captain motioned towards the chair on his side of the desk.
    He sat. The Captain slipped him a tablet and turned away.
    “Read it.” She whispered.




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    I hope you all enjoyed, this is my first time writing something like this. Its probably rough but any criticism is helpful.
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    UPDATE- daily chapter is coming soon, i have a bit of school work to do first. let me know if you guys are enjoying it so far
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    “D-d-dead,” Rye stammered, “I don’t understand, she was healthy!”
    “Truly, I am sorry Ensign,” Captain Lin said softly with her head down, “and this other piece of news will hopefully put you in a better mood.”
    “Sorry Captain but I doubt it.” Rye struggled to say this through his held back tears.
    “Well, Lieutenant Junior Grade Rye I need you to report to head of security for new orders.” Captain Lin gave a smirk and gestured for Rye to leave.
    “Yes Captain,” Rye said with renewed strength, “she would want me to keep going.”
    Lieutenant Strouse was the head of security on the starship USS WISP. Strouse was a short man, but he was one of the strongest people Rye had ever seen. Legend has it he took down 5 Klingon warriors by himself, no faser just bare handed.
    “ahh, Lieutenant Junior Rye,” Strouse exclaimed in a thick Scottish accent, “your new pip is on the desk with your faser.”
    “Thank you sir,” Rye replied reaching for his faser and then applying his new pip to his collar, “Captain Lin said you had new orders for me.”
    “yes,” Strouse said lighting up, “Have you ever been on an away team?”
    “only training for Star Fleet, nothing for real sir.” Replied Rye hesitantly.
    “Don’t worry lad, this one is simple.” Replied Strouse pointing to a computer screen.
    Strouse began to explain the mission, they were to beam down to an unknown planet and check the readings that the WISP had picked up from its planetary scan.
    “Rye to transporter room 6.” Lieutenant Commander Joyce announced over the communicator.
    “Acknowledged,” he replied tapping his communicator, “Rye out.”
    Rye put his faser in its holster and headed for the transporter.
    “Five to beam down.” Said Joyce to the transporter engineer.
    “Energise”
    Suddenly Rye and the away team were in a dense jungle. Rye remembered what he had learned and brought out his faser and stood still awaiting orders.
    “Sir, what is it we are looking for?” Rye asked
    “Life forms Rye.” Grunted Joyce
    “Sir, if we are looking for life forms we will only find animals in this jungle. I recommend we find our way out into the plains where humanoid life would be more prone to exist.” Replied Res.
    “I don’t need- “started Joyce but was soon cut off by Rye.
    “He’s right sir,” Said Rye defending Res, “If there is humanoid life on this planet and they have even the slightest bit of sense then they would move to the plains.”
    Joyce’s eyes burned into Rye’s and rye did the only thing sensible, he stood his ground. He knew that Joyce had to listen to his team to become a good leader. Rye holstered his faser and stared straight back at Joyce.
    “Fine, but if you’re wrong I will personally remove you from the USS WISP.” Barked Joyce.
    And so, they began their journey through the dense forest. When they came to a clearing Rye saw a hut and motioned for the team to stop. He knew the prime directive prohibited Star Fleet officers from interfering with the development of new civilisations.
    “We should observe from here,” whispered Rye to Joyce, “we should call for a science officer to bring down scanning equipment sir.”
    “Very well,” sighed Joyce, “away team to WISP, requesting permission to observe alien civilization and access to a larger scale scanner.”
    “Granted,” replied Captain Lin, “Joyce I want you to beam up to the WISP for further commands. Oh and Rye is in command of the away team from here.”
    Joyce grunted but did as he was told. He beamed up and left Rye in command.








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    today's update is taking longer than expected, I got in the zone and it is pretty long. It will be here soon though
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    sorry for the silence guys, I have school monday and tuesday and I cant post on the weekends
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    update will be here in a couple of hours.
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