Homemade Fleet Advertisement

Jim T Smith · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 5:51 AM

Well, since no one replied in my other thread, I'll put it here.

http://www.mediafire.com/?jzjwqwmmh0n

I made an advertisement for the fleet as a personal project. I hope you like it, and want me to endeavour making a better one. I was going to make cuts so that the watermark doesnt show, but I dont have the software. It would also be flush with the background of the captions. So, if anyone has software suggestions, can fix this themselves, or can buy me a full version of FRAPS, please notify me.

Sharpkiller · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 1:25 PM

Looks very nice. There's a few corrections that I think should be made, such as correcting the spelling of "desiding" (correct spelling is deciding). I would also change the "logo" at the end of the video to the official {UFP} logo, rather than some random UFP logo off of google images with "{UFP}" overlaid over top of it. I'd also suggest using footage from other {UFP} supported games like RPG-X and Armada 2 instead of just BC.

Babyhead4127 · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 1:49 PM

i agree good video but need to cover more range of other games we play but on a whole good video

Jim T Smith · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 3:25 PM

I cant exactly find the actual logo, and I yeah. I never proof read the thing.

I do realize there are others games we play, but please take note that I only have RPG-X and BC. Do you know how hard it was to find a recorder for BC alone?

Then there is the fact that whenever I call for help from the Harriers, I hardly get any response. I tried contacting via MSN, but that didnt work.

Babyhead4127 · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 4:40 PM

Originally Posted by {UFP}J. Tiberius Smith

I cant exactly find the actual logo, and I yeah. I never proof read the thing.

I do realize there are others games we play, but please take note that I only have RPG-X and BC. Do you know how hard it was to find a recorder for BC alone?

Then there is the fact that whenever I call for help from the Harriers, I hardly get any response. I tried contacting via MSN, but that didnt work.

you busy tommorw ?? i give u hand with sum other stuff but help u with grammer i just as bad

Taisen-74656 · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 5:05 PM

Originally Posted by {UFP}J. Tiberius Smith

Then there is the fact that whenever I call for help from the Harriers, I hardly get any response. I tried contacting via MSN, but that didnt work.

I'd be willing to help out, I'm doing a few other RP related videos at the moment.

I don't recall you asking for help, but then again, I'm not as active on the forums as I used to be, so its likely that your threads become lost in the tombs of my New Posts...

Add me on MSN, and pop me a message, and we can talk there.

John Hathaway · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 6:15 PM

Can you upload this to our YouTube account once the edits are done Tiberius? If you've not got an account on our group let me know and I'll let you in.

Jim T Smith · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 7:52 PM

I'll upload it to youtube, and renew it as I make revisions. Now that I quit one of my websites, I can be commited to the {UFP} and my movie making.

I'll add you soon Taisen.

If you mean Sunday, Babyhead, nope. Im busy doing a parade. But today Im home free.

Here it is with spelling correction. I cant find the fleet logo unfortunantly. If someone can link me, that would be much appretiated.

[YOUTUBE]<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/hwaajh00OoI&hl=en&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/hwaajh00OoI&hl=en&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>[/YOUTUBE]I have at least 8 copies, so I really want the next to be the last for now.

Veritas · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 8:32 PM

Yes, I don't recall being asked for assistance in recording RPG-X. Perhaps there was a thread I missed?

The advertisement looks good, though, aside from the things others have mentioned. It was quite dramatic!

Jim T Smith · Posted Sat 05 Dec, 2009 8:56 PM

There was a thread in member comm though. So I got some random people on the BC servers to help, which was not a good idea. So I gave up and used the AI.

DeltaLeader38 · Posted Sun 06 Dec, 2009 4:22 PM

I like the Ad!

Trav · Posted Mon 07 Dec, 2009 3:08 PM

Not bad at all. I agree with everything that has been said.

You can find the logo here, it has a very small size though.

Thomas Mullaly · Posted Mon 07 Dec, 2009 4:40 PM

http://www.ufplanets.com/mullaly/ufplogohigh.png

Jim T Smith · Posted Mon 07 Dec, 2009 9:26 PM

The next version with the actual {UFP} logo is being published as we speak. Im going to experiment on ways to record footage in Elite Force.

[YOUTUBE]<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/tCUsxWAHjkg&hl=en_US&fs=1&rel=0"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/tCUsxWAHjkg&hl=en_US&fs=1&rel=0" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>[/YOUTUBE]

Jim T Smith · Posted Sun 20 Dec, 2009 2:08 PM

I would greatly appreciate commments on youtube and more here if you would.

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